My Holiday - winning entries
- 1st - Vicky Pollard age: 10 from Dumfries and Galloway
- hi, my name is vicky and this is my story of cyprus! it all started on friday when we drove down to newcastle, where we stayed in a hotle near the airport. we had to wake up at five in the morning! we had to be at the air port by six so we could check in. they waded mine and my sister karens suitecase, then my mum and dads. it took an alfuly longtime. we found the seats that my mum, dad, sister and me would be siting on to get to cyprus. it took three hours to get there but it was worth it.
we found our appartment in pafos hotel in pafous with a five minute walk to the beach. i went in the pool every day because it was so hot. my and my sister went for a paddle the the tiqucose sea, my mum sunbathed and my dad went to sleep so we burried him in sand,( not his head of couse!
- 2nd - Chris Wright
age 11
from United Kingdom
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In my hoiday i went to stay at my friends house his name is james
he has a quad bike.A quad bike is like a car but it is smaller and not
really as fast. We had a wicked time he has a trampolen too. A trampolen is a big
circle on legs with a big pecie of bouncy matireal
on it it was really good fun.
We also walk about 1 mile to a river near
by its called the river mimram.Its so deep that if you lie down in it
you can float down the river but in summer when it doesnt rain much you
cant because it is too shalow so u will scrap the bottom. After we
walked back and had a bath then we went down stairs and watched a cool
video.
- 3rd - rachel wheeler
age 13 from purley in Surrey
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in my holiday so far i have been shopping once and swimming once
as well. it was great fun even thow i cant swim. ive been to fly my kite. we went to epsom to by it. it flys reall good. i ma going to sutton
on saterday to go cloths shopping and it is going to be reall great fun.
most of the time i have been watching the same vidio . i have watch it
about five times now.
i cant wate till i go hoilday. we are going to
brodstaers. i am really exited now.
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4th -
amanda-jane bendall
age 14
from england
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this hoilday i whent on a camp for four days.on the frist night
we dressed up as your favrote cartoon chaericters and i whent as
cindeller. on the 2nd day we whent on a very long hike which was hrae as we
whent through bogs.
on th 3rd day we whent on different activitys and i
whent on a cannal boat ride and it whent up a lock and then back down
it. on the 4th day we had to put the tents away in the rain which was
very very exorsing then after that i came back home.
then on the wensday
after the camp i whent to sacrbrough sea life center, tere where lots of
differnt sea creatures then after i had been in there i whent on to the
beach. then the monday after that i whent to the meining musenue and it
was ok,then a week later i whent to the film and photgarphy musenan and
it was fun pertending to be a raido persenter then on the wensday i
whent to flanigo land and i whent on the log flum and the magnm froce
which was scary.
a week later i whent to richard duns and i was very fun and befroe i whent back to school i whent on a walk at boltan abby and that was tring. then on the friday i whent back to school to find
my new class room.
the end of My Hoildays